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Pool Party by Emberblue Pool Party by Emberblue
Another flyer design. I love blue and white. :) And I think "Swatch it" is my new favorite font.

I'm trying to learn as much as I can, so advice, ideas and constructive criticism are greatly appreciated. :heart:
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philangelus Jun 8, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
I think that ball is going to hit the girl in the face! ;)
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Emberblue Jun 8, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
LOL!!! That would be funny.....if I designed it so it hit her in the face. I'm sure Jr. Highers would find that funny. :D
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laurabeth Jun 5, 2007  Student Traditional Artist
I really have no critique, 'cause it's great. I love the tonal range and hues of blues you used. Pretty noice if you ask me. The composition isn't overwhelming but interseting, too.
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Emberblue Jun 5, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks so much. :hug: I really love blue, black, and white color schemes. And it works so well for water. :)
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:iconfallen2grace:
Love it! But I think mabey the lower right hand corner is a little empty. Mabey it's just me. I dunno but overall it looks good!
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Emberblue Jun 4, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks. :hug:
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ArtistXero Jun 4, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Man..what is up with that surfer dude? First he tries surfing between wee little islands and now hes trying to surf at a seemingly inground pool party. I think he might have a disorder like "Inappropiate Surfing Syndrome" or something. I'm sure there's help for I.S.S. although I think the medicine may cause nausea and internal bowel itching maybe. Either way I like the look of this, 'bout the only thing I would do different is to crop off the bottom inch so that the text is closer to the bottom of page...but that's just how I would do it.
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Emberblue Jun 4, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
I think you may be right. I think the medication for I.S.S. also may have symptoms of diarrhea, loss of appetite, drowsiness, heart failure, kidney failure, and sudden death. Ask your doctor for details.

You are right, that probably would have helped. These have already gone out but I'll keep that in mind for next time. It seems like there are always things that need to be changed.....after the file has already gone to print, lol.
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Hmmm. For me it would be the type, it needs better work on the area where the "j" meets the "r" and where the "r" meets the "t". Probly give them a little bit more space between each other so that the word "jr" and "party" could be more distinct.

Oh wells, thats just minor. It looks great. Somehow the background gives it an overall oriental feel. Just wondering if its intentional :) Anyhow, its great as it reflects water, abit Zen thou, but its great.
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Emberblue Jun 3, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Good point. I didn't pay much attention to the text when I made this. Thanks for the comment. :D

Well, the oriental feel was not intentional. But it sounds cool. Maybe I will try using the circles more in some later pieces. :)

Thanks again!
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