Man..what is up with that surfer dude? First he tries surfing between wee little islands and now hes trying to surf at a seemingly inground pool party. I think he might have a disorder like "Inappropiate Surfing Syndrome" or something. I'm sure there's help for I.S.S. although I think the medicine may cause nausea and internal bowel itching maybe. Either way I like the look of this, 'bout the only thing I would do different is to crop off the bottom inch so that the text is closer to the bottom of page...but that's just how I would do it.
I think you may be right. I think the medication for I.S.S. also may have symptoms of diarrhea, loss of appetite, drowsiness, heart failure, kidney failure, and sudden death. Ask your doctor for details.
You are right, that probably would have helped. These have already gone out but I'll keep that in mind for next time. It seems like there are always things that need to be changed.....after the file has already gone to print, lol.
Hmmm. For me it would be the type, it needs better work on the area where the "j" meets the "r" and where the "r" meets the "t". Probly give them a little bit more space between each other so that the word "jr" and "party" could be more distinct.
Oh wells, thats just minor. It looks great. Somehow the background gives it an overall oriental feel. Just wondering if its intentional Anyhow, its great as it reflects water, abit Zen thou, but its great.